Strangers

7.13

v3.5

Liked the play on words.  Ending could be a little stronger.

I liked the beat and the chorus, the lyrics were a little confusing. Like it would talk about Jesus, and then sounded like a break up song. Overall I loved it and thought it sounded amazing.

the beat is really good, a vibe. but the lyrics are a bit confusing

I loved the lyrics and how real it is for today's society with like anxiety and fear

Nice hook

It has a wonderful beat to it

I liked the background music a lot and the voice of the singer alot, it was very unique

loved the pre-hook


If I’m Being Honest

7.38

v1

The Bridge could be better.  Love the musicality maybe a little more guitar.

I would listen to this song on repeat I loved the beat, the lyrics, everything.

i love the vibe, the lyrics are really good( may need a bit of tweaking though). sounds like something LANY would do

I like the echos/ conversation happening with that person singing but it was a little hard to understand the lyrics

I like the lany vibe of this song, also really like the outro

Ed sheeren??

It was good it reminded me of Justin Bieber music I think

love the bridge but it felt a little short / cut off


Okay

7.13

v0

I feel like this song is kind of a testimony of lived out experience.  The lyrics are very encouraging for anyone who may be going through any rough situation.

I liked it maybe there could be a beat drop in between one of the hooks but I would listen to that one on repeat as well

i love this!! but it seems more of a worship song for a youth group band rather than mainstream

Love the message, the lyrics are short but powerful, very relatable

The hook is kind of annoying to me, but it’s a well put together song. I just feel the hook word “okay” should be changed

Selina gomez??

Pretty voice and the background music goes well with the voice

pre might need more punch


Sorry

8.75

v3

The beginning of the song was a little weird but it got stronger through the end of the song.  It’s very catchy but I feel like the hook could have a few more lyrics.

I love the beat, the lyrics, the form of the song and the melody was really done well. I could sing this song out screaming in the car I loved it.

super good!! this could go two ways: mainstream sounding like an apology after a breakup or apologizing to God. super cool. the best gives me drives at sunset vibes.

I definitely relate to the lyrics, I like the best, I feel like that's more women centered

Very nice hook and bridge, like this song a lot

Thank you for saying sorry 😀

I like the cursive singing and the song flows well and its catchy it kinda sounds like halsey on some parts

hook is really good, but the bridge!! love the electric on that part


Rhythms

6.75

v0

Really good chorus love the added breath when the singer sings Breathe.  Solid lyrics.

A little repetitive but the beat was amazing absolutely loved the beat drop

i love the lyrics and beat! it would be great for another futures album though

I feel like if I was listening to it and not reading I wouldn't understand that it says breathe in the chorus but I enjoy the song overall

I like the delay on the word breathe from the drop in the song

Eh it's fine Ed shearen

I like the lyrics my favorite part is when he sings the I can breeeeathe part

liked the verses! didn’t love the melody line of the pre, but the chorus was good after


One More Chance

8.75

v3

This was sang with a lot of emotion which I really liked.  Love the transitions in the song between it being soft bringing more emotion and the build up to the stronger portions.

Amazing. I love it so much the guitar, the Rhythm. The bridge was so beautiful!

this makes me want to start crying!!! so good ! this one can totally impact lots of people especially in their teens and young adult ages

Very relatable for everyone and exspecailly with teens, love the beats/music and the lyrics and message, I thought about like what if it says one more chance after the chorus during the instrumental,

Like the chord changes in the bridge a lot, good lyrics, I like the chord progressions in general

Good beat

The lyrics are great and I like the singers voice reminds me of halseys voice, the song is sweet and sad I like it

chord progressions and dynamics were so good!!


Carte Blanche

6.88

v0

Not sure but this one didn’t really do it for me as much as the others.  It has a nice rhythm but the lyrics can be better.

I loved the chorus and the bridge of this song, there could be more beats the Rhythm was a bit repetitive

wow i’m obsessed! i have no notes i love that one

Not my favorite, it reminds me of a country song, I got confused in the whole message

Well put together

Pretty good 👍

When i first heard it I wasn’t sure but the voices actually are a vibe and go well with the song I like it it gives an indie vibe

love the chill vibes. reminds me a lot of lauv + lany - I’d listen for sure!!


Don’t Walk Away

8.50

v1

This is a very well written song with strong music behind it.  The bass and the music brought kind of a darkness to the song 🎵

It’s okay, the best is really really good but I think the song starts too fast, like it goes straight into the verse. I think it should have an intro to then lead into the verse. It’s starts off a little strong. Other than that it was really good.

love this ! it’s a bit different from the rest of the songs so far and will give good contrast to the album

Love the beat and lyrics, great message,

Great song, release it now

Yes.

Its really good this sounds exactly like Halsey omg its so catchy and powerful

The bridges!! Very solid and strong


For God So Loved LA

8.00

v1

This is another catchy song with strong pop lyrics that I can hear on the radio right now.

This one was amazing the message was really beautiful. The rhythm and the form of the song worked really well together.

i could see this song being used for tik toks or instagram reels and it just blows up in a good way. very good vibes

Feels like a song you can yell to with the windows down, I feel like it's more female liked song

Good chord progressions

It's fine

I like it it’s sweet

lyrics are really good and the chord progression feels strong


Trust Me

7.63

v1

I love the tenderness of the artists voice in this song.  He didn’t over sing he kept it simple and sometimes simple is very powerful.  This is Ed Sheeran like and could be a top 40 single.

I love the form of the song I think there was too many lyrics for example I don’t think the pre chorus was necessary but overall I would have this song in my playlist I loved it.

a banger! wow, love this in every way

I like the final verse but it was hard to understand some of the words

Personally don’t like repetitive tags but others might, well put together regardless

Kinda boring

I like the song it’s not bad at all

Loved the overall vibe, one of my favorites


Better Days

7.50

v1

Another solid song with solid lyrics.

I liked the message, it was a little off beat with the lyrics but I think it was beautiful.

such a cute song !

Reminds me of like Macklemore songs, like the simple but impactful lyrics

Song is catchy

Yes girl

I like it it’s good

I felt like it stayed on the same level most of the time, could’ve used more dynamics


Baby I’m Falling

8.50

v1

I can see this also as top 40 single.  The lyrics are very relatable to anyone who has been in love.  Music is strong and compliments the lyrics.

The beat was amazing!!!

love it! this needs to be on the album it could go so far !! but it would be so much cooler as a duet. the first verse should be a guy singing and the second verse should be the girl. add some cool harmonies in the verse. verses could be soft and the beat drop in the chorus is awesome. and acoustic version would be awesome as well.

Liked the lyrics but not all the repeats of like syllables like in high

Catchy, and good instrumental and nice bass line

Super idol

Its a sweet song

chorus is really solid + bridge was surprising! but very cool


Therapy

6.13

v0

I like that the lyrics play well with the song title.  Other than that it’s an okay song with solid production.

I don’t really like the form of the song. It was a little off.

overall lyrics and song i give an eight. it would probably be better as an acoustic version or just vocals with some piano. the beat seems very repetitive at this point so you would want some dynamics in the album. but this song would be an awesome addition as a stripped back version.

I like the idea and beats, I didn't like the long pause between I've tried and cold world, very catchy and relatable to teens

Nice instrumental, but the chorus is boring to me

So u need therapy?

Deep lyrics and sweet sound

love the vibe of the song, I kind of get lost at the chorus (too short maybe?) but verses and bridge are really good


Why

7.50

v1

It’s good to have questions about why certain things happen but as a Christian I have assurance that all of life’s questions can be answered through Christ and his word.

I needed the beat to last longer during the instrumental parts but overall the form, rhythm, and melody of the song were amazing I loved the beat!!

obsessed with that beat drop and the runs in the vocals !!!

It's very relatable to me and I love the instrumentals and repeats of lyrics, the autotune at the end wasnt my favorite

Good song, I like the pre-chorus drop a lot

It's ok

I like it a lot the lyrics are very relatable

the intro is so good!


Second Chances

8.50

v1

Solid production with nice catchy lyrics.

I really liked this one.

i live this but it would be good for a youth group band album

You was more easily understand the second time around, loved the song and repeat of you in the background

Like this song a lot

Has a really good beat to it

I like the sound of the song it’s a calming song and has deep meaning

pre into the chorus is so solid — feels good! and the bridge is great


Worth It

7.88

v0

Good song I thought the whistle was a nice touch.

It was a cute song

once again super good song! love it, love the vibe, but would be much better for a youth group band album

Loves the message and easy lyrics to understand

Cool but a bit cringe on one part

Its good it sounds like something Justin Bieber would sing

fun vibes! liked the whistle


Dear Lucy

8.00

v0

This sounded like a rough draft of what the song could be.  I like what I heard it does need an extra bridge and chorus.

The message behind it is really good. I loved the beat. An outro beat would be nice.

should be a bit longer at the end but i love it

Love the message and title, I feel like it a pretty gender neutral song

Favorite song of set so far

Cool

Its a good message on leaving ppl that distract u from god kinda sounds like a bit of a diss track but not really at the same time I liked it

love it a lot, not really anything I’d change!


Tears Won’t Go To Waste

8.00

v1

This is a really sound song with strong lyrics.  I can hear this on the radio representing the freedom someone can feel once they’re out of a rough relationship.

Message was nice needed more beat less lyrics

yes!! love it !! definitely need this song in my life ! relatable

Love the lyrics and very relatable for people, impactful,

Nice second pre-chorus

I love the beat Ariana grande

I like the sound of the song it’s good

I’d listen to this in the car — super simple but it’s a fun vibe